2012년 1월 11일 수요일

Chain Writing

One dark and stormy night, when one student crawled out of his bed. He was carrying a flashlight. Nobody heard his footsteps. He slowly walked out of the KLMA dormitory. Something crawled out if his bed. It followed the boy. Strangely, it had a mechanical beep sound.

The boy kept walking and walking. The thing kept following. But the beep sound was so small, the boy couldn't hear it. When the boy stopped, he could hear a small beeping sound. That was when the brushes bristled and a shiny thing glinted in the flashlight.
That morning, the boy's lifeless body was found at the first floor. He was chocked to death. The police took the case and took the body to investigate.
- 5hours later -
Suddenly, there a scream at the boy's house. The boy's body had been mysteriously moved to his house. The scream was his mother's. She fainted at the sight. At the same time, the emergency bell rang at the police station. The body had disappeared. The police got the call from the boy's mother and went to his house to investigate. One neighbor said that she heard a "Gruuuggggg" sound around that time. It was defined as door creaking. 
- Tomorrow -
The police came back to the boy's house. When they went to check his body for the last time before going to the boy's house, the body had disappeared again! The police was stunned. They found three clues at the boy's house. One of the vase was broken, so the criminal had been in a hurry.

They decided to go to the old winston place because it had a bloodprint. Nobody lived in there for a long time. The police drank strong black coffee and they armed themselves with guns. When four police got into the building, the door slammed shut. It was pitch black. Even their flashlights wouldn't work. Somebody took out their battery. There was a creeking sound, and the police shot towords the sound, but they all missed. They loaded their gun again and even though they were scared, they split into two teams and they went. Suddenly, the two policemen heard a scream from the other team. And they saw a horrible sight. One of the police from the other team was killing the other policeman. So the murderer was the police!!!!

The two left policemen ran towards the door. They called the other policemen and they captured the murderer. He was sentenced to be locked in jail forever. 


Okey, that was super gross, but I changed it a lot, and I've tried my best. 
This happens when you let boys do chainwriting
The original story was for the boy to go to the PA's room and scare all the PAs and then he tells them to give snacks back pretending to be a ghost, and everybody becomes happy!! All the snacks were eaten by the police.

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  1. This is gross! But it's also funny. You have true skill as a creative writer. I like your beginning the best.

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